the diagram is split into different categories based on feelings but the word amazed should not be conected to the word despair
chloe
I think tearful should be next to despair and sorrow because when you feel like that you feel sad and the you could burst into tears. You feel this when you are in despair or sorrowful.
Kristian Still
What a wonderful reflection, Chloe. Well done.
megan matthews
I don’t think that guilt should be next to reluctant, because when your feeling guilty you feel the complete opposite of reluctant. I think guilt should be next to; angry, sorrow and heartbreak. This is because you go through all those emotions when your feeling guilty.
Kristian Still
Another fantastic comment, well done.
Kia Powell
I think that friendship should go with trust because an order to have trust you need some one to give your trust to.
Kristian Still
That is an interesting idea. Can you perhaps give an example Kia?
Callum Jopson
i think that painful and worried should not be next to eachother because you do not get worried when your painful
Kristian Still
I think your write, I little more clarity or explanation might help here.
Joseph
i think painful should be next to war because in war theres alot of pain and painful feelings
Kristian Still
Yes, indeed Joseph. Please check the quality of your writing (capitals, punctuation). Where should it be moved to?
Joseph mccreery
i think painful should be next too war because theres alot of painful feelings in war and a lot of pain
sacha
i think pain should be next to hope as all the pain you may go though there might be hope at the end as you go though pain you have to be brave to go though it all in addision to being brave you will have to trust any one who will try to help you
Kristian Still
Lots of very bright, thoughtful commentary. Take a good look at the sentence. How many sentences are your presenting?
Sacha Eves
I think pain should be next to hope as when suffering, there might be hope at the end of the tunnel. Although I think trusting yourself to get through the pain, depends on your bravery and courage, in addition, having hope can vairy in all shapes and sizes.
Zak Croshaw
I think amazed should not be with death because you wouldn’t feel amazed when you are going to die.
Kristian Still
A good observation. Where should it be moved to?
Henry Hammond
I don`t think that confidence should be next to death because I don`t think you would feel very confident when you are dying. I think confidence should be next to pain and brave.
Kristian Still
I would constructed answer Henry. Have you looked over some of the previous comments from students? I would be interested to hear your views on these.
Tom buckley
I think the word friendship should conect with trust because you need to be able to trust a friend.
Kristian Still
Indeed you do, what about the remaining words it is connected to? Are these useful, connect or disconnect?
Callum Chapman
I think that Proud should go with Confidence and Bravery but not with Fear.
Kristian Still
A strong proposal, but why?
Mitchell holland
I think that amazed should not be connected with fear and death and it should be above the other two oranges because it would fit better.
Kristian Still
Could you tell me why its better above the other two oranges?
Rose kite
I suggest that thoughtful and worried should not be conected because worried is a sad emotion and thoughtfull is a kind emotion
Kristian Still
Nice work, a strong sense of emotional maturity here.
I dont think painful and worried should be together because when yourn worried you dont get terrified and when your in pain you dont get worried you would hurt more.
Kristian Still
It is a little hard to know what you are exactly suggesting, could you simplify your answer.
Bethany Philpott
I think brave and courage should be with each other because
you need the brave to in courage your self to do stuff.
Lewis Clay
i think that agony should be linked to friendship where theres friendship theres agony too.
Kristian Still
Interesting. Not sure I understand fully. You need to explain what you mean.
the diagram is split into different categories based on feelings but the word amazed should not be conected to the word despair
I think tearful should be next to despair and sorrow because when you feel like that you feel sad and the you could burst into tears. You feel this when you are in despair or sorrowful.
What a wonderful reflection, Chloe. Well done.
I don’t think that guilt should be next to reluctant, because when your feeling guilty you feel the complete opposite of reluctant. I think guilt should be next to; angry, sorrow and heartbreak. This is because you go through all those emotions when your feeling guilty.
Another fantastic comment, well done.
I think that friendship should go with trust because an order to have trust you need some one to give your trust to.
That is an interesting idea. Can you perhaps give an example Kia?
i think that painful and worried should not be next to eachother because you do not get worried when your painful
I think your write, I little more clarity or explanation might help here.
i think painful should be next to war because in war theres alot of pain and painful feelings
Yes, indeed Joseph. Please check the quality of your writing (capitals, punctuation). Where should it be moved to?
i think painful should be next too war because theres alot of painful feelings in war and a lot of pain
i think pain should be next to hope as all the pain you may go though there might be hope at the end as you go though pain you have to be brave to go though it all in addision to being brave you will have to trust any one who will try to help you
Lots of very bright, thoughtful commentary. Take a good look at the sentence. How many sentences are your presenting?
I think pain should be next to hope as when suffering, there might be hope at the end of the tunnel. Although I think trusting yourself to get through the pain, depends on your bravery and courage, in addition, having hope can vairy in all shapes and sizes.
I think amazed should not be with death because you wouldn’t feel amazed when you are going to die.
A good observation. Where should it be moved to?
I don`t think that confidence should be next to death because I don`t think you would feel very confident when you are dying. I think confidence should be next to pain and brave.
I would constructed answer Henry. Have you looked over some of the previous comments from students? I would be interested to hear your views on these.
I think the word friendship should conect with trust because you need to be able to trust a friend.
Indeed you do, what about the remaining words it is connected to? Are these useful, connect or disconnect?
I think that Proud should go with Confidence and Bravery but not with Fear.
A strong proposal, but why?
I think that amazed should not be connected with fear and death and it should be above the other two oranges because it would fit better.
Could you tell me why its better above the other two oranges?
I suggest that thoughtful and worried should not be conected because worried is a sad emotion and thoughtfull is a kind emotion
Nice work, a strong sense of emotional maturity here.
I dont think painful and worried should be together because when yourn worried you dont get terrified and when your in pain you dont get worried you would hurt more.
It is a little hard to know what you are exactly suggesting, could you simplify your answer.
I think brave and courage should be with each other because
you need the brave to in courage your self to do stuff.
i think that agony should be linked to friendship where theres friendship theres agony too.
Interesting. Not sure I understand fully. You need to explain what you mean.